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Username: Nydas

Post Number: 15183
Registered: Jun-06
Though written in first person, it is meant for general application.

Mod of 'Pyar kiya to darna kya'

Pyar kiya hamne pyar kiya,
Bibise chhupake Pyar kiya
Pyar kiya hamne chori ki,
Bibise chhupake Pyar kiya''pyar kiya

Bibika khana laya tha,'.Voh ladkiko maine de diya;
Ladkine muze pyar diya'. Voh abhi tuk mein bhoola nahin; ''pyar kiya

Bhukha hua mein ghar aya,'Bibine pyarse khilaya
Pyar kiya hamne bibise bhi, '..Isme khatra hai bhi kya''pyar kiya

Ek din mein bimar hua'Duniyamen bimari bhi hoti hai;
Bibi to bilkul ghabhra gai'..doctor ki pas le gai;
Doctorne bola .HIV hai .. Bibine puchha ye kya hai,
Meine bola yeh kuchh nahin, isme koi khatra nahin hai; ''pyar kiya

'.. '.
'.. '.

Aaj mein akela hun
Voh ladki or Bibi dono mar gaye hai
Doctor ki pas roz jata hun, 'Pyarse nafrat karta hun
Muze pata hai-HIV hai .. Ab chhe mahine baki hai
Koi mere jaise na bane ' Bhoolse aisa pyar ne kare ''pyar kiya

Aisi tamana rakhata hun' Pyar se nafrat karta hun
Pyarse jannat milta hai' aur pyarmen jhanam bhi hota hai
Jhootha pyar ki yeh kahani hai' har roz canadadamen hoti hai''pyar kiya
 

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Username: Chumley

Post Number: 278
Registered: Dec-08
Do you have 8spk module?
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Username: Lamborghini

Post Number: 36
Registered: Apr-08
Ye salehko marne do,
kyoki woh ekdam papi hai.

pyar kiya tho darna kya, ye salekho marne do
isko pyar math kaho, yeh to nafrat hai,

sirf canada ka badnami na do
ye log dunia ke kone kone pe hai

Well, That is my best shot !!! I am not a natural in shayari like you, Nalin.
 

Platinum Member
Username: Nydas

Post Number: 15184
Registered: Jun-06
Very good comment in poetry.
It is your impromptu shot - I am sure you could do better if you spent time.
 

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Username: Chumley

Post Number: 279
Registered: Dec-08
Thanks Nalini,
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Username: Saqeeb9000

Post Number: 5031
Registered: Oct-07
nydas lol
 

Silver Member
Username: Picanha

East LA

Post Number: 449
Registered: Jun-08
rubaiyat of omar kayan

Roses r red, Violets r blue, God made me pretty, but wat happend 2 u!

roses are red, violets are blue, most poems rhyme, but this one
doesnt!!!

roses are red, violets are blue, a kippers a fish, dat smell like you, lets not despair,
lets live in hope,dat one day ull discover soap

Red r red, violets r blue l luv chocolate more than u!!


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Username: Nydas

Post Number: 15187
Registered: Jun-06
Modded from rubaiyat of omar kayan

The moving finger writes,
And having writ moved on;
Not all thy abuse, nor thy idiocy.
will bring your beloved poster back.
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