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Username: Nydas Post Number: 15183 Registered: Jun-06
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Friday, May 29, 2009 - 16:12 GMT Though written in first person, it is meant for general application. Mod of 'Pyar kiya to darna kya' Pyar kiya hamne pyar kiya, Bibise chhupake Pyar kiya Pyar kiya hamne chori ki, Bibise chhupake Pyar kiya''pyar kiya Bibika khana laya tha,'.Voh ladkiko maine de diya; Ladkine muze pyar diya'. Voh abhi tuk mein bhoola nahin; ''pyar kiya Bhukha hua mein ghar aya,'Bibine pyarse khilaya Pyar kiya hamne bibise bhi, '..Isme khatra hai bhi kya''pyar kiya Ek din mein bimar hua'Duniyamen bimari bhi hoti hai; Bibi to bilkul ghabhra gai'..doctor ki pas le gai; Doctorne bola .HIV hai .. Bibine puchha ye kya hai, Meine bola yeh kuchh nahin, isme koi khatra nahin hai; ''pyar kiya '.. '. '.. '. Aaj mein akela hun Voh ladki or Bibi dono mar gaye hai Doctor ki pas roz jata hun, 'Pyarse nafrat karta hun Muze pata hai-HIV hai .. Ab chhe mahine baki hai Koi mere jaise na bane ' Bhoolse aisa pyar ne kare ''pyar kiya Aisi tamana rakhata hun' Pyar se nafrat karta hun Pyarse jannat milta hai' aur pyarmen jhanam bhi hota hai Jhootha pyar ki yeh kahani hai' har roz canadadamen hoti hai''pyar kiya
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Username: Chumley Post Number: 278 Registered: Dec-08
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Friday, May 29, 2009 - 16:21 GMT Do you have 8spk module?
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Username: Lamborghini Post Number: 36 Registered: Apr-08
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Friday, May 29, 2009 - 16:30 GMT Ye salehko marne do, kyoki woh ekdam papi hai. pyar kiya tho darna kya, ye salekho marne do isko pyar math kaho, yeh to nafrat hai, sirf canada ka badnami na do ye log dunia ke kone kone pe hai Well, That is my best shot !!! I am not a natural in shayari like you, Nalin.
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Username: Nydas Post Number: 15184 Registered: Jun-06
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Friday, May 29, 2009 - 16:38 GMT Very good comment in poetry. It is your impromptu shot - I am sure you could do better if you spent time.
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Username: Chumley Post Number: 279 Registered: Dec-08
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Friday, May 29, 2009 - 16:48 GMT Thanks Nalini,
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Username: Saqeeb9000 Post Number: 5031 Registered: Oct-07
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Friday, May 29, 2009 - 16:52 GMT nydas lol
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Username: Picanha East LA
Post Number: 449 Registered: Jun-08
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Friday, May 29, 2009 - 21:02 GMT rubaiyat of omar kayan Roses r red, Violets r blue, God made me pretty, but wat happend 2 u! roses are red, violets are blue, most poems rhyme, but this one doesnt!!! roses are red, violets are blue, a kippers a fish, dat smell like you, lets not despair, lets live in hope,dat one day ull discover soap Red r red, violets r blue l luv chocolate more than u!!
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Username: Nydas Post Number: 15187 Registered: Jun-06
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Friday, May 29, 2009 - 21:16 GMT Modded from rubaiyat of omar kayan The moving finger writes, And having writ moved on; Not all thy abuse, nor thy idiocy. will bring your beloved poster back.